Comments on: I need a great opening sentance for my business 'sales' letter?

By: Tech

Tech — Wed, 20 Feb 2008 19:43:06 +0000

I suggest that you give it to someone else to write your letter.

Your letter might rub off the wrong way and might think you from foriegn countries.

I have that same problem so don't think I am insulting you.
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By: A . Z .

A . Z . — Wed, 20 Feb 2008 18:46:09 +0000

Turn it on its head and don't sell. Tell them what they want which they know they want deep down. (Remember it is a nos game as the many people in this world are attracted to as many different tactics.)

'As an approved contractor we are looking to capitalise on growing our service of outdoor maintance. Our present success and reinvestment programme into our business has allowed us to broaden our ever personal service to further organisations and business Partners.'

(then lead in with the nitty gritty. Keep it fact, don't be over zealous just give a bit of butter with that bread. Cavia for new business makes you look like a fraud or a suit giving it the spill we've all heard before & don't need it from another.

Oh God do I love Capitalisim (that's my suit arrogance coming out .)
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By: angiem

angiem — Wed, 20 Feb 2008 18:45:40 +0000

if its outside we can fix it..clean it, install it and maintain it.....
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By: Kaye Batch

Kaye Batch — Wed, 20 Feb 2008 18:43:57 +0000

to answer the question really need to know name of company
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By: ~@@~

~@@~ — Wed, 20 Feb 2008 18:38:30 +0000

I don't know the answer to your question and I don't mean to come across cheeky, but you spell it 'sentence'.
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